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Pallidamors
08-27-2004, 06:59 AM
Chapter 1: A boy's fear.
Windurst was a prosperous and bustling small village in the southeastern quadrant of Vana'diel. Known for its' fishing, highest quality clothesmaking, incredible bonecrafting, and unsurpassed cooks, it seemed a Utopia for peace, beauty, and innocence. Home to Mithra and Tarutaru, it posessed a playful and joyous air about it, and was always welcoming visitors with open arms and warm smiles.
Born the youngest of a humble family of Tarutarus, Pallidamors was always trying to help out around town. He took great pride in running errands, sharing his limited knowledge of the world, and ever curious of what lay behind the gates of his beloved home.
He became easily bored of his classes at the Aurastery, and dreamed of someday becoming an adventurer like the great heroes of the Great War. And his interest only amplified, watching the travelers come and go from the docks of the Airship Port. Though not all was as serene as it appeared.
With the Yagudo becoming an increasing strain on the community of Windurst, he prayed that the Star Sybil would be able to take action to relieve the worries of the peaceful villagers. The typical retaliation to an attack on the villagers was met with an offering of peace, usually items of great value, damaging the already modest economy of Windurst's inhabitants.
But his prayers would be answered in a way he had never fathomed.
Pallidamors' father arrived home later than usual on a Firesday, wounded and weary. He stumbled in, saying nothing, and slumped to rest on the nearest chair. As his siblings tended to his fathers' wounds, and his mother sit silently in the commonroom, wringing her hands. Young Palli stood amidst the commotion, seemingly locked in place, unable to move, speak, or even think.
His mother, noticing his young son's despair, moved slowly toward him and knelt down to see him eye to eye. He was crying.
Brackish tears streamed down his cheeks, converging on his chin, and dropped silently upon the wooden floor. She took him into embrace and explained that this was the way of life. As much as the Windurstians stayed out of the affairs of the beastmen, the attacks only became more fierce. Places such as Saurtabaruta, which were once playgrounds for the Mithran and Taru children, are now infested with treacherous enemies.
Palli remained silent and still. What would happen if his father weren't to return home? What would he do if his friends were to vanish during recess? His mind was blurring with thoughts of horror and fear. As his mother dryed his tears with her weathered garments, his father was falling asleep, and the rest of the children were quickly following suit, laying off to rest in the arms of their brave father.
"It's time you went to sleep, my sweet Pallidamors", she softly spoke into his ear.
No response. His eyes locked onto his father. Unable to console her trembling child, she picked him up, and tucked him into bed. Shortly thereafter, she turned off the lanterns and slunk into her own bed.
Pallidamors was unable to sleep. His fear of his father's, and the rest of his family's safety encompassed his every thought. Slowly, these lofty fears turned into loathsome hatred. His fists clenched tight, and his teeth ground together until they were about to shatter.
"ENOUGH!" he thought to himself. "If the peace and prosperity of my people is to persevere, action must be undertaken!"
Stealthily removing his covers, he snuck out of his home under the cover of night. Though he had no idea how to stifle the attacks, he knew where he had to start...

Richey
08-27-2004, 07:43 AM
Very good story!! :thumup:

Sarizaddi
08-27-2004, 08:13 AM
Very excellent Palli! Thank you for keeping the spirit alive!

Pallidamors
10-30-2004, 05:51 AM
Chapter 2: Apprentice in the Black Arts
Every night since his fathers' ambush, Palli snuck out of his home while his family slept and learned all he could about black magic in the vacant Aurastery. Page by page, book by book, the words were embossed into his brain. Teaching himself spells may not have been in the best interest in a child so young, but he knew his intentions would quickly be shot down by his family. While thumbing through the pages of each of the tattered and worn tomes, he found he was learning magic at such a great pace, he'd neglected to even practice casting these mighty magics. But where?
Unlike the magic of light, elemental spells could not b practiced in town. Not only was it forbidden, it was potentially dangerous, as most of windurst is made of wood and straw, unlike the cold, stone empires of Bastok and SanD'oria.
It was time this small taru took his newly acquired knowledge and put it to use. But how? He knew his friends would tattle on him and his parents would surely punish him. After careful thought, it was decided. He would just persue his intentions in plain daylight, and hope he woul not be met with reprisal.
Daylight shone over Windurst, and the day began like any other. The children of the Star Onion Brigade were playing make-believe in port, the mithra were shopping and tending to the dhalmel farm in woods, and all was in place.
Though eager, Palli was sure to check over his shoulder both ways before departing into East Sarutabaruta, to make sure nobody had seen him leave. Through Leviathan's Gate he strolled unopposed, as the residents of Windurst were completing their morning routines, and young Palli soon foun himself outside, and alone.
Lush green grass and towering mountain lie all around him. The sunlight poued over the valley, eminating an auro of life into the plains. Wandering aimlssly around him were mandragoras an rarabs, nonthreatening wildlife that is generally harmless to the passers by, but have lately been more aggresive and have a look of ferality about them.
Pallidamors held his arms out in front of him, and recalled his most basic spells. Utilizing his bounds of knowledge, he began to cast his first spell...
Nothing. Nothing at all had happened. And the same result with his second attempt, and his third. Soon hours had passed and not a single twinge of mana had been produced.
Any other adventurer would have given up and returned to study what had been missing, but Palli was so intent, and so driven to serve the needs of his bretheren, he would stay out all day and night to complete his task. Soon enough, something did happen.
As his arms were poised outward in front of him, he noticed an aura of darkness eminating from his hands. The darkness grew and grew, and multiple colors began flowing from outide the darkness. Nearby, a mandragora began to charge toward Palli... and before he could draw his staff, the earth divided and smashed the meek mandragora, however it remained in persuit, almost unscathed by the almost incidental attack. Palli was outmatched, and he knew he was in trouble.
Without thinking, he turned and ran in the direction of Windurst, but before he had even looked at where he was going, he smashed into another person, and got the wind knocked out of him.
It was Pallidamors' father. And he was not happy.
His aging father drew his staff, and with one fell swoop, dispached the mandragora effortlessly, then looked down at his trembling child. Moments passed...
Several moments...
"Son. Get home... now!"
And turned and walked away. Pallidamors was still on his hands and knees recouperating. He was in deep trouble.

Salest
10-30-2004, 03:25 PM
awesome start makes me wanna read a lot more :)

Opiejab
11-02-2004, 11:38 AM
oh no!!! poor paill

Starz
11-02-2004, 11:40 AM
may I have more story please? ^^

Drashogar
11-02-2004, 12:47 PM
Palli Palli!!! Man I can't remember the last time I was so ... "Drashogar was drawn in!"

/clap /hurray /cheer

Would love to read more if you get around to it :)